We presented our film opening so far, getting close to the completion, to the class and received both positive and constructive feedback. Overall they liked it and wanted to see it finished, but we did get some helpful criticisms with some fresh ideas and opinions outside of our group. we will take all of the feedback into consideration as we finish and tweak with the opening to make it the best we can.
We received feedback like some of the transitions were a bit repetitive being used throughout the opening, and some selection of the scenes during the close-up of the helmet were not as effective because of lots of traffic and having Tesco in the background during some of it. They recommended using more obscure and enigmatic backgrounds to keep the full focus on his helmet and to leave the audience wondering where he is/going.
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